Editing- Narrative Change

Opening Sequence

When story boarding and making our animatic we planned for the opening scene to show Georgie (protagonist) walking through a field and finding a tunnel which she enters and leads her too the white room and the cupcake. On editing we soon realised there was not enough time for all of this to happen and since we were no longer shooting the powder paint fight in the forest with the tunnel we decided to axe this scene.

Neon scenes

We originally wanted some close up performance shots of Georgie in neon. We soon discovered the complications this brought about and we did not have enough black light equipment to do so. Therefore a good alternative was to invert the shot in editing to create a similar effect. We played around with this and the results were as follows...




Although it created a neon effect that with the right make up could look like glow in the dark paint, we decided not to put this in.