Editing Feedback

Test Edit

Once we had all our footage in place, edited to the music and had improved on previous feedback, our final (test) edit was ready to be reviewed.

Feedback

• 1:48-1:54 Too much going on, too many overlays 

We decided to take the second layer of video off these close up shots.

•  Introduction to forest scenes (1:05-1:11) could be made clearer. 

In order to establish the introduction of the powder paint scene in the forest, we decided to overlay archive footage from Alice in Wonderland (1951, film) where she enters the forest, over this shot as done before with the rabit hole sequence.